From the excellent book Writing Tools: 50 Essential Strategies for Every Writer (2006) by Roy Peter Clark:
- Begin sentences with subjects and verbs.
Make meaning early, then let weaker elements branch to the right.
* Order words for emphasis.
Place strong words at the beginning and at the end.
* Activate your verbs.
Strong verbs create action, save words, and reveal the players.
* Be passive-aggressive.
Use passive verbs to showcase the "victim" of action.
* Watch those adverbs.
Use them to change the meaning of the verb.
* Take it easy on the
-ings.
Prefer the simple present or past.
* Fear not the long sentence.
Take the reader on a journey of language and meaning.
* Establish a pattern, then give it a twist.
Build parallel constructions, but cut across the grain.
* Let punctuation control pace and space.
Learn the rules, but realize you have more options than you think.
* Cut big, then small.
Prune the big limbs, then shake out the dead leaves.
* Prefer the simple over the technical.
Use shorter words, sentences and paragraphs at points of complexity.
* Give key words their space.
Do not repeat a distinctive word unless you intend a specific effect.
* Play with words, even in serious stories.
Choose words the average writer avoids but the average reader understands.
* Get the name of the dog.
Dig for the concrete and specific, details that appeal to the senses.
* Pay attention to names.
Interesting names attract the writer — and the reader.
* Seek original images.
Reject clichés and first-level creativity.
* Riff on the creative language of others.
Make word lists, free-associate, be surprised by language.
* Set the pace with sentence length.
Vary sentences to influence the reader's speed.
* Vary the lengths of paragraphs.
Go short or long — or make a "turn" — to match your intent.
* Choose the number of elements with a purpose in mind.
One, two, three, or four: Each sends a secret message to the reader.
* Know when to back off and when to show off.
When the topic is most serious, understate; when least serious, exaggerate.
* Climb up and down the ladder of abstraction.
Learn when to show, when to tell, and when to do both.
* Tune your voice.
Read drafts aloud.
* Work from a plan.
Index the big parts of your work.
* Learn the difference between reports and stories.
Use one to render information, the other to render experience.
* Use dialogue as a form of action.
Dialogue advances narrative; quotes delay it.
* Reveal traits of character.
Show characteristics through scenes, details, and dialogue.
* Put odd and interesting things next to each other.
Help the reader learn from contrast.
* Foreshadow dramatic events or powerful conclusions.
Plant important clues early.
* To generate suspense, use internal cliffhangers.
To propel readers, make them wait.
* Build your work around a key question.
Good stories need an engine, a question the action answers for the reader.
* Place gold coins along the path.
Reward the reader with high points, especially in the middle.
* Repeat, repeat, repeat.
Purposeful repetition links the parts.
* Write from different cinematic angles.
Turn your notebook into a "camera."
* Report and write for scenes.
Then align them in a meaningful sequence.
* Mix narrative modes.
Combine story forms using the "broken line."
* In short pieces of writing, don't waste a syllable.
Shape shorter works with wit and polish.
* Prefer archetypes to stereotypes.
Use subtle symbols, not crashing cymbals.
* Write toward an ending.
Help readers close the circle of meaning.
* Draft a mission statement for your work.
To sharpen your learning, write about your writing.
* Turn procrastination into rehearsal.
Plan and write it first in your head.
* Do your homework well in advance.
Prepare for the expected — and unexpected.
* Read for both form and content.
Examine the machinery beneath the text.
* Save string.
For big projects, save scraps others would toss.
* Break long projects into parts.
Then assemble the pieces into something whole.
* Take interest in all crafts that support your work.
To do your best, help others do their best.
* Recruit your own support group.
Create a corps of helpers for feedback.
* Limit self-criticism in early drafts.
Turn it loose during revision.
* Learn from your critics.
Tolerate even unreasonable criticism.
* Own the tools of your craft.
Build a writing workbench to store your tools.
(cf Write Many Read Once (1999-11-25), How to Write (2000-11-28), Writing Rewards (2001-06-09), Smell of Good Prose (2006-07-03), Asimov on Writing (2008-02-02), Pulp Fiction Rules (2008-10-20), Rules for Writing (2010-03-07), Worth Writing Well (2016-08-17), Tips for Aspiring Op-Ed Writers (2017-11-18), Writing vs Good Writing (2018-01-21), ...) - ^z - 2019-12-29